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My good friend Bucky and his bike, a 2007 Harley Davidson Street Bob. One of my very first attempts at portraits.








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:iconforgetfulrainn:
That's super bad ass! The only thing that puzzles me a bit is what's on his head? Is this take from inside a garage? It looks like he's carrying the stuff on his head. Maybe you should try to remove all that upper stuff and see what you get; I think it could be nice!

Outside of that, this is a kickass photo. I like!

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we were under hiway over passes. i thought it was a cool location. i happen to like the background! lol at first i thought it might be wierd looking, but it grew on me. :P

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:iconforgetfulrainn:
Ahh, I get it now. It's not bad, that background wall thingy, I think it could have been better a bit more up or a bit more down. Get that biker and take more pics! Is a good subject.

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i do agree, but there's nothin i can really do about it. i may reshoot, but i'm pretty content with the way it is. thanks for the input tho. always appreciated! :):hug:

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i do agree that the black part of the background there (is it the underbelly of the overpass?) would look a little better if it was above his head just a tiny bit... i didnt think about it at all till i read that comment tho lol but other than that i honestly think this is perfect the angle on this makes it so badass while the shadowing on the bike gives it this kinda dark/mean mysteriousness and i LOVE the horizontal lines of the beams in the black part of the background then the vertical (waterlines?) above that. great shot!!

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i'm so glad you like this. i was really happy with the way these turned out. first real attempt at portrait photography.

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